On 25th of January, 11, my sister, grandmother, aunt, and my mom went to Mall Of Arabia and shopped, we brought new bags for school my sister took it for school and my bag didn't fit for school books sadly but my sister had luck hers fitted. When we went back home we were so tired of all that walking. We opened the news to check how the demonstration went, we saw that there were protesters and policemen having clashes at that time we got scared of what was going on and we stayed watching the news. The next day we had school it was fun yet we were scared. On Thursday, it was nothing or we thought that were no problems, I was invited to my friends’ house for gathering I really had fun and enjoyed being with my old friends It was great day and I went back home, I watched news then I went to bed. On Friday the 28th, it was the worse day ever in my life, The demonstration was very tough as the police decided to deal very rough with the protesters, we didn’t go out all the family was worried of what is happening, I saw my mom and dad whispering and me and my sister was very scared. On Saturday I went to Diala's house and slept over at her house it was so much fun we did a lot, we went to the club, we played with the waves, and finally watched iCarly the movie it was amazing we didn't see the whole movie because it was long. On the other day I woke up at 7:00AM because Diala woke me up early and we completed the movie in the morning, Diala's father said: "were your clothes", we said: "ok", then we went down in the garden and played with the dogs, then we headed home, stayed because it was dangerous to go out and there was a curfew starts at 3:00PM. On Sunday, I heard that Farida was in my compound so I told her to come to my house I was bored so we played, then her mom came and stayed a little with my mom then they all went home. The fourth day I was so scared because the demonstration was much bigger!!! The same thing happened I told Farida to come again so we could play together. The day after that I went to Farida’s house I was happy, we made a surprise for our sister's and danced. Sometime after that my friend Alia made her birthday and it was fun we watched a scary movie and made a play. Then our tennis opened again after long time being closed, and I was excited to go and I played a lot. On another day we went to the Gizera club and played with my friends at the gymnastics room, we went to the pool and started to play, it was too crowded. I used to go to Palm Hills club a lot during this long holiday because it is safe place and very near to my house, and I meet all my friends there, it was good to see them. During the long holiday I used to read and to open my Gmail waiting for anything was posted to do it. Finally the last day I went to Dandy Mall with the family and I prepared all my stuff for new day at school.
Fatima, I am very happy that you are starting to expand your writing. I would love for you to read your posts to your mom or dad before posting. I think that it may help you find the areas that you are creating run-on sentences and using improper grammar.
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